Feedback 1
Awesome plot idea! Very well thought out.
Careful that involving too much can make it confusing.
Need to be careful of the casting.
Feedback 2
Very good plot, well thought through.
Suggestions: Kill the girl.
Feedback 3
Brilliant idea!
Be aware of the 2 minute time limit.
Interesting and complex storyline.
Zoom out on wall of faces in final shot.
Good location ideas!
Feedback 4
I like the missing posters on the wall idea, sounds quite familiar though.
Diary is a good idea.
Maybe not use the daughter shouting at the man.
Flashbacks with different colours is a great idea.
Emily Strickland:
The feedback has been very positive and helped us to for-see possible problems to stop them before they become a complication. Three out of four said that they liked the narrative which we were all very pleased about and have decided to use that plot. Feedback one said we need to be careful with casting and I too share this worry as we need our actors to portray the exact emotions we have planned, this will keep the opening looking professional and give it the outcome we are expecting. Feedback two has suggested killing the girl but given no reason why so I personally would like to keep the audience in the unknown about her location and ending, this will allow the audience to formulate their own opinions on her outcome. Feedback three suggested a zoom out on the wall of faces for the final shoot, we will take this into account by filming multiple angles and zooms in and out so we have a large number of shots to choose from. I was very pleased that feedback four liked our diary prop because I think it's individual and can work very well with revealing and concealing information from the audience.
Molly Baker:
All the feedback we have been given is very positive and constructive. Feedback 1 said our idea was very well thought out but to not include too much as it could make it confusing. They also said we need to be careful about what actors to cast from this we have decided both the ages for both our characters. Feedback 2 suggests killing the girl which was in our narrative anyway, not sure if they were paying attention... Feedback 3 also liked our idea however they said to be aware of the 2 minute time limit as we have a lot to pack in. They also suggested zooming out on the faces of the children in the final shot which I think we are going to do. Feedback 4 they said the key focus on the diary is a good idea, but to not use the flashback of the daughter shouting at the man. The use of different colours in the flashback is a good idea to establish the time difference.
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